Orphani ..........O Poet I do not know?

Unending

dance with me in ( dreamsss
    hands pressed )
                           our lives together  
music swayed souls
                          as one
unending.................................................

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Debbie Guzzi August 25, 2009 at 5:22 PM loverly waltz. Light & Love

Charmaine Chircop August 21, 2009 at 4:40 AM i can feel this magical music-dreams hands pressed --how romantic--i love it--charma

Renu Lama August 20, 2009 at 10:01 PM is this a dedication to someone very especial to you dear friend?i feel like that.short but this poem speaks a lot...........unending. love,renu

Jessica Arteaga August 20, 2009 at 7:59 AM so much love and feeling in these words, lovely poem

Sara Kendrick August 20, 2009 at 7:53 AM Very nicely written. I can feel the music. Sara