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Undulating

urgency of their needs
unloved by other creeps
Ursula abandoned
Ulrich, a bachelor
ugly and overweight
undiscovered beauty
underneath one’s covers

4/30/2021
Pleiades U Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Kim Merryman
HMS verified 6 syllables per line

appreciationlonelinessverse

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Paul Schneiter

June 17, 2021 at 4:11 PM

Kim, Exceptional skill with words is on display in this poem. It's fresh, creative, and thought-provoking. Nice! Hugs, Paul

Kim Rodrigues

June 18, 2021 at 4:18 AM

Thank you, Paul!

Sara Kendrick

May 18, 2021 at 5:01 AM

Enjoyed reading your unique and creative winner. Congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

May 18, 2021 at 5:29 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Anitha Jayasankar

May 5, 2021 at 7:56 AM

I just loved your thoughts... Congrats on your win Kim... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Kim Rodrigues

May 18, 2021 at 5:29 PM

Thank you, Anitha!

Kim Merryman

May 4, 2021 at 7:42 PM

There's more to a person than just what's on the outside. Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2021 at 2:25 AM

Only one soulmate needed. So true.

Juliet Ligon

May 4, 2021 at 12:17 PM

Interesting pairing. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2021 at 2:25 AM

Thank you, Juliet!

Caren Krutsinger

May 4, 2021 at 7:53 AM

This "Ulrich, a bachelor ugly and overweight" ended up as a happy surprise!

Kim Rodrigues

May 5, 2021 at 2:25 AM

She is just what he needs.

Unseeking Seeker

May 3, 2021 at 8:02 PM

Beauty not skin deep ... Congrats Kim!

Kim Rodrigues

May 4, 2021 at 3:58 AM

Exactly...thank you!

Joseph May

May 3, 2021 at 7:44 PM

Congrats on your win Kim, Nicely done

Kim Rodrigues

May 4, 2021 at 3:58 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Jan Allison

May 3, 2021 at 3:49 PM

well penned Kim, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

May 3, 2021 at 6:34 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Paula Goldsmith

May 3, 2021 at 8:52 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Great Job. Have a blessed day..........................

Kim Rodrigues

May 3, 2021 at 6:31 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Gershon Wolf

May 2, 2021 at 5:52 PM

Better than 'The Ugly Ducking,' Kim! What a neat idea for 'U.' First-class all the way! ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues

May 3, 2021 at 4:24 AM

Thank you so much. ~ Kim

Quoth Theraven

May 1, 2021 at 7:27 PM

Kim, Wonderful use of undiscovered beauty in Pleiades found 'under one's covers'. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues

May 2, 2021 at 1:28 AM

Thank you, Richard.

Victor Buhagiar

May 1, 2021 at 1:24 AM

Maybe a waterbed might do the trick. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues

May 1, 2021 at 5:38 AM

I used to have a waterbed but my husband preferred a regular mattress. We bought one for our firstborn also. Our cat hid her kittens behind the waterbed so the kids couldn’t get to them. Hugs :)

Judy Ball

April 30, 2021 at 8:06 PM

Nicely done Kim. And the moral to this story: "You can't judge a book by it's cover." Really good one my friend. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues

May 1, 2021 at 5:36 AM

Truly! Thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich

April 30, 2021 at 4:47 PM

such an interesting word choice and interpretation. You are so original, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

April 30, 2021 at 5:49 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

John Fleming

April 30, 2021 at 8:51 AM

Find it rather difficult to interpret...but it is strangely compelling of that there is no doubt. Intriguing! All the best, Kim -- cheers! :) john

Kim Rodrigues

April 30, 2021 at 9:59 AM

Two unlovely, lonely people find happiness together.

Alexis Y.

April 30, 2021 at 8:47 AM

WoW! Kim, You have used the letter U to compose a poem a good poem. It has a nice flow and makes so much sense. You hit the ball out of the park with this one.You made it look so easy; I’m finding it very challenging to write a Pleiades with the letter U. Congrats in advance. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues

April 30, 2021 at 9:59 AM

Thank you, Alexis. First Pleiades I have done in a while. Hugs...Kim

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