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Undulating

urgency of their needs unloved by other creeps Ursula abandoned Ulrich, a bachelor ugly and overweight undiscovered beauty underneath one’s covers 4/30/2021 Pleiades U Poetry Contest Sponsor: Kim Merryman HMS verified 6 syllables per line

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Paul Schneiter

Date: 6/17/2021 4:11:00 PM

Kim, Exceptional skill with words is on display in this poem. It's fresh, creative, and thought-provoking. Nice! Hugs, Paul

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/18/2021 4:18:00 AM

Thank you, Paul!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/18/2021 5:01:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your unique and creative winner. Congrats. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2021 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, Sara!

Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 5/5/2021 7:56:00 AM

I just loved your thoughts... Congrats on your win Kim... Hugs.. ~ Ani

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/18/2021 5:29:00 PM

Thank you, Anitha!

Kim Merryman

Date: 5/4/2021 7:42:00 PM

There's more to a person than just what's on the outside. Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim M

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 2:25:00 AM

Only one soulmate needed. So true.

Juliet Ligon

Date: 5/4/2021 12:17:00 PM

Interesting pairing. Congratulations!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 2:25:00 AM

Thank you, Juliet!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/4/2021 7:53:00 AM

This "Ulrich, a bachelor ugly and overweight" ended up as a happy surprise!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2021 2:25:00 AM

She is just what he needs.

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 5/3/2021 8:02:00 PM

Beauty not skin deep ... Congrats Kim!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2021 3:58:00 AM

Exactly...thank you!

Joseph May

Date: 5/3/2021 7:44:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kim, Nicely done

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/4/2021 3:58:00 AM

Thank you, Joseph!

Jan Allison

Date: 5/3/2021 3:49:00 PM

well penned Kim, Many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2021 6:34:00 PM

Thank you, Jan!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/3/2021 8:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative write. Great Job. Have a blessed day..........................

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2021 6:31:00 PM

Thank you, Paula!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/2/2021 5:52:00 PM

Better than 'The Ugly Ducking,' Kim! What a neat idea for 'U.' First-class all the way! ~ gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/3/2021 4:24:00 AM

Thank you so much. ~ Kim

Quoth Theraven

Date: 5/1/2021 7:27:00 PM

Kim, Wonderful use of undiscovered beauty in Pleiades found 'under one's covers'. -Richard

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/2/2021 1:28:00 AM

Thank you, Richard.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/1/2021 1:24:00 AM

Maybe a waterbed might do the trick. Hugs.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2021 5:38:00 AM

I used to have a waterbed but my husband preferred a regular mattress. We bought one for our firstborn also. Our cat hid her kittens behind the waterbed so the kids couldn’t get to them. Hugs :)

Judy Ball

Date: 4/30/2021 8:06:00 PM

Nicely done Kim. And the moral to this story: "You can't judge a book by it's cover." Really good one my friend. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/1/2021 5:36:00 AM

Truly! Thanks :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/30/2021 4:47:00 PM

such an interesting word choice and interpretation. You are so original, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 5:49:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

John Fleming

Date: 4/30/2021 8:51:00 AM

Find it rather difficult to interpret...but it is strangely compelling of that there is no doubt. Intriguing! All the best, Kim -- cheers! :) john

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 9:59:00 AM

Two unlovely, lonely people find happiness together.

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/30/2021 8:47:00 AM

WoW! Kim, You have used the letter U to compose a poem a good poem. It has a nice flow and makes so much sense. You hit the ball out of the park with this one.You made it look so easy; I’m finding it very challenging to write a Pleiades with the letter U. Congrats in advance. Have a great day and weekend-Alexis

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/30/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank you, Alexis. First Pleiades I have done in a while. Hugs...Kim