Undone

UNDONE I have come undone Powerless as one My heart is heavy, my thoughts run deep I'm drowning in the tears I weep Searching for a sacred place To help me mend my fall from Grace Looking out to see the light As darkness falls on silent night Just one more prayer to save my soul Reclaim a life that lost control Free the past with self atone And be grateful for each day I own

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Beata Agustin

Date: 2/25/2025 5:57:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Lori Wells
Date: 4/20/2025 4:55:00 PM

Thank you I appreciate the feedback

Garrett Bass

Date: 2/23/2025 6:08:00 AM

Gratitude is key! Beautifully written

Lori Wells
Date: 4/20/2025 4:56:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read and acknowledge my poem