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Undone

I needed you, Like a drug through my veins I was completely dead, but my heart still pumped at the sound of your name You were my reason for being here Without you, my life became fear But it seems I've found a second chance You'll be there if no one else I try so hard to deny what we'll become As it always does, love will come undone

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/27/2009 7:00:00 PM
What a great Love-On-The-Rocks tribute!! So much said in just a few great lines. Nice work! Much love, Steve
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Date: 2/27/2009 6:48:00 PM
Tayler, your gratitude for one who cares shines in this excellent poem! Good work! Carolyn
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