Undone

I needed you,
Like a drug through my veins
I was completely dead, 
but my heart still pumped at the sound of your name

You were my reason for being here
Without you, my life became fear

But it seems I've found a second chance
You'll be there if no one else

I try so hard to deny what we'll become
As it always does, love will come undone
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Voorhees Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 7:00 PM
What a great Love-On-The-Rocks tribute!! So much said in just a few great lines. Nice work! Much love, Steve
Devonshire Avatar
February 27, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Tayler, your gratitude for one who cares shines in this excellent poem! Good work! Carolyn
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