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Undisturbed

I push past the reasons and expectations no comparisons or judging, unexpected gyrations you do your best with all that is offered while I pack my bags and head for the border call or don't, write it all out or not don't fill me with songs that you once forgot sing from your heart or don't sing at all dance with me once or fill my dance card hike up the mountains for a grander view once you get there, there is nothing that's new drink from your bottle but it won't quench the thirst for knowledge you possess but bruises and hurts you thought that you loved and all was so easy but it just leaves you numb and feeling queasy the one that you want boards a plane for the coast and there goes your heart with the one you want most the one by your side that hangs on your word is silently sleeping and lays undisturbed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/1/2010 1:32:00 AM
Actually I think these are quatrains and one sextuplet JB. Tough love thing well expressed in verse JB. Hope things work out. But things just usually don't do they? Good one. tom
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