Undetectable Lights

I've been homeless and I've owned homes
Each time in love with the girl of my dreams
I've walked down some lonely streets alone
Been let down by love twice over it seems
Life's mysterious riddles of reds and greens
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Chachere Avatar
August 18, 2010 at 4:58 PM
if you've been without a house, and lived through it. you must have a great wisdom(: ~Always&Forever Lynette
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 5:59 PM
ok, I am going to track down that poem to reread it. Oh, was it way way back on another page? That must be why I can't find the Foolproof poem??(my memory is way too short. hahaha)
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2010 at 5:35 PM
MItch, I didn't know what your message to me was talking about. The poem you told me, I don't know who wrote it and I can't find it here under your poems. Anyway, I think many people are saying many things here recently. I know some of what I am saying myself has definitley been taken out of context! LUv, Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 11:23 PM
I liked how you related this to the street lights, Mitch. Maybe you are color blind? haha. (just kidding) Luv, Andrea
A  Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 8:51 PM
ENJOYED YOUR POEM MITCH.-SKAT
Culverhouse Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 3:23 PM
funny yet profound write!! enjoyed today!
Mehta Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 5:29 AM
A nice poem on riddles and greens of life
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