Underwater Garden

Vibrant coral reefs,
Blossom all over the sea:
Flowers of the deep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Hickman Avatar
September 13, 2009 at 4:07 PM
images from your haiku are truly beautiful, delivering to all the vision of the flowers of the deep,,loved that line,,blessings..Cecil
Goff Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 7:06 PM
beautiful images! Ruben!...jim
Culverhouse Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 3:27 PM
I would love to see one up close, i never have one day I will.
Lopez Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 6:29 PM
coral reefs are the most beatiful part of the ocean with all of its sea life! very nice......
Bloomsfield Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 4:27 AM
Underwater Kingdom,i've got to see this view ,im going snorkling Mr Moreno:)excellent write-Celina
Martin Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:48 PM
Very creative, you capture my mind and won't let it go with your haiku.
Higgins Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 1:46 PM
Another colorful piece of poetry.
Curcio Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 9:46 AM
Beautiful, Raul. They certainly are an "underwater garden"
Kendrick Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 6:44 AM
Beautifully written to match the beautiful design that God has made even though I have not had the pleasure of seeing this in the flesh only from tv. Keep writing. Sara
Devonshire Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 3:38 AM
The reefs off Key Largo and the Bahamas are everything that you describe in this beautiful haiku. Nice work, Raul!
Strand Avatar
September 10, 2009 at 12:07 AM
Yes they do look like that Raul.Thank you for you encouragement.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today
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