Alexis Y. Poet Verse

Understanding

Understanding takes time.
              Unfortunately we, 
          Usually don't care,
    Unless someone's close to, 
      Us, offenses often go,
      Unnoticed because we're,
               Unaware of them too.
               








           04/30/2021
     Contest: Pleiades U 
   Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Victor Buhagiar April 30, 2021 at 11:04 PM Loved the way you changed tactics in this Pleiades. Best for a win.

Unseeking Seeker April 30, 2021 at 8:09 PM Power of simplicity! Superb take on ‘U’ Pleiades

Judy Ball April 30, 2021 at 7:46 PM Excellent Alexis. You send a good message with this piece. Well done. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2021 at 4:47 PM I really like your word and how you defined it. WEll done!!

Marilene Evans April 30, 2021 at 4:31 PM Alexis, I just wrote a poem with the same title and entered it in the contest without reading anybody's poem at all. Now, I am reading some poems and read this one. Good luck! Marilene Evans April 30, 2021 at 5:04 PM Funny! James tells me that all the time. I guess we think alike since we have the same birthday.... LOL.... Alexis Y. April 30, 2021 at 4:42 PM Hi Marilene, Great minds think alike lol!To be honest the only thing our poems have in common is the title. You did a great job with the letter U:-) Alexis

Vijay Pandit April 30, 2021 at 3:46 PM Wonderful sentiments my friend--your message resonates. All the best, Alexis.

Sotto Poet April 30, 2021 at 3:07 PM Hi Alexis, you penned a superb U Pleiades, your verses flow, as a nice wavering breeze, I enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing