Underneath

I probed every corner
Touching where you’d been
Hoping to find your warmth
Liberated by the night
Searching for passion
Now hollow voids
Impressions left behind
Under a crumpled blanket
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 17, 2011 at 8:44 AM
Those hollow voids; I've seen them before, too. Well put.
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