Underneath

Underneath
It all, it
Makes me fall, and
Turns a new leaf.
Grief turns to built rage, and
Self lies gone arise.
Despise my eyes
Died to hide
Denied
Cries.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Henderson Avatar
January 23, 2011 at 9:38 AM
Very nice imagery! Though I know there is much more there to see! Keep searching! Steve
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