Underneath

Useless
No good
Destined to fail
Empty feelings
Remebering who i was
Nothing left of me now
Emotions cloud my head
Agony in my heart
Turning for direction, but end up in circles
Hurting more than imaginable
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Granstrom Avatar
May 24, 2009 at 4:53 AM
I can feel your pain and I pray your not feeling it anymore. Prayer helps, Jessica,and time heals. Love the poem though and I hope when you write down your pain it helps you cope like it does for me. Thank you for your kind comment on my poem. I really appreciate it.
Kroeger Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 12:20 PM
Wow your better then me Jess really you are
Al-Riyami Avatar
May 20, 2009 at 7:09 AM
I hope this poem does not reflect your expereinces.All in all I love the structure and the emotions you add to each word such as:NO good instead of bad,or MORE THAN imaginable instead of unbelievable.Please keep those kinds of skills and usage.It makes a poet like you with so skills,Great:)
Megens Avatar
May 19, 2009 at 2:46 PM
WOW ALOT OF PAIN IN YOUR WORDS LIFE GOES ON TRUST ME I KNOW KEEP WRITING
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