'Melancholy is the happiness of being sad' - Victor Hugo'
UNDERCURRENT OF MELANCHOLY Flow of melancholy in opulence pricking piercing pleasant pain oozing from chasm of heart. Somber solemn sacred soul stops to sense. Deep depression despondence seeks tolerance in vain. Bubbling blood flooded though lamentation. Undercurrent stream of dream craving aspiring hope. Checked Syllable count 10-7-6 11/23/19 Third Place 'Pick a Title vol 11 Kimo Poetry ' Contest by Edward Ibeh.
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'Melancholy is the happiness of being sad' - Victor Hugo'