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Under Water, Under Smoke

I feel pressure pushing into me. 
It is coming from all sides. 
I struggle to breathe and begin to gasp. 
It's everything from my past
coming to make a second round. 
The feelings of regret coming around. 
So deep. 
So deep I've almost drowned. 
But the waters started to recede 
with the help of a little weed. 
Now there's fire in my lungs 
where healthy ones once hung. 
Now blackened and cold 
and only leaves it's once strong hold.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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February 19, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Hannah:) Congratulations on having your awesome poem featured on the soups Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
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