Under the Thumb

Brainwashed
Dreams quashed

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30 October 2017

For the "One Footle Only" contest, sponsored by Judy Konos.
(Honorable Mention, after 3 x podium placements)
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Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 9:23 PM
I really like this footle. Well done.
Michaels Avatar
November 18, 2017 at 1:28 PM
Thanks very much, Line! Regards, John.
Callus Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 12:51 PM
A sad situation. Congratulations on this fine entry, John. Regards // paul
Michaels Avatar
November 10, 2017 at 4:42 AM
Thanks very much, Paul. Kind regards, John.
Pett Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 6:05 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved HM John, brilliant footle very clever. :))
Michaels Avatar
November 4, 2017 at 5:04 AM
Thank you, Roy - I really liked yours too. All the best, John.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 6:14 PM
Oh I see this is your winner. Nicely done!
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 6:22 PM
Thanks, Andrea... am questioning my choice of entry now, but what can you do...? :) Kind regards, John.
Roper Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 1:02 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win, John! Hugs Eve ~`*
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:59 PM
Thanks for the kind comments, Eve. Much appreciated. Regards, John.
Y. Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 12:59 PM
Hi John, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Very kind!! Well done to you, too! Regards, John.
Daniel Avatar
October 31, 2017 at 12:39 AM
Very nicely put, John:)
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:58 PM
Thank you, Jo! Regards, John.
Roper Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:11 PM
So very true, it is so sad that happens... good luck in the contest . Hugs Eve ~`*
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:58 PM
I do feel sorry for people in that situation; such a bit piece of themselves is oppressed / suppressed with no apparent way out. Thank you for your kind words of support. Kind regards, John.
Y. Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 5:53 PM
Hi John, This is a good one for the contest. Best wishes:-) Alexis
Michaels Avatar
November 1, 2017 at 5:56 PM
Very kind of you to say! I really liked yours, too! All the best, John.
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