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Under the Moon

When people retreat Wind will then fill the moonlight into the street The sound of the crickets heard like flowing water In this dim night, no one wonders it's in the Swan Lake

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/7/2017 8:38:00 PM
This is very clever, well done my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 11/2/2017 9:53:00 PM
Thanks indeed my friend, please forgive me for this dalayed response. Best wishes to you!
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 11/2/2017 9:53:00 PM
Thanks indeed my friend, please forgive me for this dalayed response. Best wishes to you!

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