Under the Moon

When people retreat
Wind will then fill the moonlight into the street 
The sound of the crickets heard like flowing water 
In this dim night, no one wonders it's in the  Swan Lake
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 7, 2017 at 8:38 PM
This is very clever, well done my friend. Have a nice evening my friend.
Pan Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Thanks indeed my friend, please forgive me for this dalayed response. Best wishes to you!
Pan Avatar
November 2, 2017 at 9:53 PM
Thanks indeed my friend, please forgive me for this dalayed response. Best wishes to you!
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