Under the Moon

Fear taking over his body,
The pain coursing through his veins.
Up above, The moon light takes over the land with what it gains,
The moon set high above the trees,
When he looks up.....power is all he sees
With brand new eyes he does now look though,
He feels stronger than any man maybe even two.
He feels as if he has been given new life,
His senses feel sharper than a knife.
All the weight has been lifted off....
It does seem,
Then the morning comes,
And he awakens to find that it was all just a dream.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Sietesantos Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 12:29 PM
Exquisite piece showing the power and mystique of the Moon! Another excellent write! Bravo! Pandita
Christian-Bowling Avatar
November 24, 2014 at 9:12 AM
Thx:):)-Love Ettie
Anish Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 9:23 PM
Some dreams come to fruition - others just fizzle out. I like this poem! Has something of a surprise ending. The Giants are starting to look really good! Did you watch them beat the Falcons? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Christian-Bowling Avatar
October 11, 2014 at 2:12 PM
I did watch them off and on....And I agree they are looking pretty good:DThx for stopping by-Love Ettie
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