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Under the Moon

Fear taking over his body, The pain coursing through his veins. Up above, The moon light takes over the land with what it gains, The moon set high above the trees, When he looks up.....power is all he sees With brand new eyes he does now look though, He feels stronger than any man maybe even two. He feels as if he has been given new life, His senses feel sharper than a knife. All the weight has been lifted off.... It does seem, Then the morning comes, And he awakens to find that it was all just a dream.

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Date: 11/14/2014 12:29:00 PM
Exquisite piece showing the power and mystique of the Moon! Another excellent write! Bravo! Pandita
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 11/24/2014 9:12:00 AM
Thx:):)-Love Ettie
Date: 10/5/2014 9:23:00 PM
Some dreams come to fruition - others just fizzle out. I like this poem! Has something of a surprise ending. The Giants are starting to look really good! Did you watch them beat the Falcons? Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 10/11/2014 2:12:00 PM
I did watch them off and on....And I agree they are looking pretty good:DThx for stopping by-Love Ettie

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