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Under The Milky Way

Milky way spiral horizon, purple midnight scattered with diamonds. Bursting Nebula's sting my eyes. Orbiting planets will soon collide. Stars gather in a whimsical bouquet, while solar winds carry me away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 1/16/2019 12:41:00 PM
I enjoyed your whimsical fantasy, Rebecca, nicely written. John
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Rebecca Ann
Date: 1/16/2019 1:18:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 1/16/2019 8:47:00 AM
Wonderful ! :)
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Rebecca Ann
Date: 1/16/2019 9:29:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/16/2019 7:35:00 AM
I love the solar winds carrying US away Rebecca, for why should you be the only one? And "scattered with diamonds". Nice.
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Rebecca Ann
Date: 1/16/2019 8:30:00 AM
Thank you Caren!