Under the Milky Way

Milky way spiral horizon,
purple midnight scattered with diamonds.

Bursting Nebula's sting my eyes.
Orbiting planets will soon collide.

Stars gather in a whimsical bouquet,
while solar winds carry me away.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Gondolf Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 12:41 PM
I enjoyed your whimsical fantasy, Rebecca, nicely written. John
Ann Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 1:18 PM
Thanks!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 8:47 AM
Wonderful ! :)
Ann Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 9:29 AM
Thank you!
Krutsinger Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 7:35 AM
I love the solar winds carrying US away Rebecca, for why should you be the only one? And "scattered with diamonds". Nice.
Ann Avatar
January 16, 2019 at 8:30 AM
Thank you Caren!
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