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Under the Bright Red Umbrella

Under the bright red umbrella Whilst all around poured down the rain I giddily kissed some fella An attempt to forget my pain. It was springtime there in Paris The faint-hearted ran from the storm Me, oh so hard to embarrass Brazenly pranced in rare form. Until a sudden loud ringing My phone rudely ended my dance The crushing news it was bringing: My mother had lost her last chance. The cancer she fought: aggressive The treatment was iffy at best Agonized cries inexpressive Of my loss, of mom’s final rest. I slumped in the rain for some hours Tears soaking as much as the clouds Until like rare winter flowers Umbrellas all over the crowds. Mom so loved the most vibrant hues Her favorite always bright red I figured I’d nothing to lose Saw scarlet above a male head. Under the bright red umbrella Whilst all around poured down the rain I giddily kissed some fella An attempt to forget my pain. November 3, 2018

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Date: 11/17/2018 12:58:00 PM
such a moving poem Cindi and a very different take on the theme, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/14/2018 11:40:00 AM
- A wonderful winning poem, Cindi :) - I wish to congratulate you, well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 11/14/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you! And thank you for taking the time to read it and comment! ~Cindi
Date: 11/13/2018 11:03:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Cindi, you had everything I was looking for. Great flow, rhyme and subject matter . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 11/13/2018 11:06:00 PM
Thank you for an inspirational subject!! ~Cindi
Date: 11/4/2018 12:21:00 PM
How cleverly you work the first stanza into your ending. Even in the midst of grief, life goes on and there's always another fella to be found. I sincerely hope you didn't lose your mother, Cindi. Best wishes for success in the contest! (It looked like Paris to me as well.) Hugs, Carolyn
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Cindi Rockwell
Date: 11/4/2018 1:18:00 PM
Thank you! Haven’t been to Paris for 40 years, but I still dream! My mother passed 10 years ago last week but it always feels like yesterday.

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