Under the Bright Red Umbrella

Under the bright red umbrella
Whilst all around poured down the rain
I giddily kissed some fella
An attempt to forget my pain.

It was springtime there in Paris
The faint-hearted ran from the storm
Me, oh so hard to embarrass
Brazenly pranced in rare form.

Until a sudden loud ringing
My phone rudely ended my dance
The crushing news it was bringing:
My mother had lost her last chance.

The cancer she fought: aggressive
The treatment was iffy at best
Agonized cries inexpressive
Of my loss, of mom’s final rest.

I slumped in the rain for some hours
Tears soaking as much as the clouds
Until like rare winter flowers
Umbrellas all over the crowds.

Mom so loved the most vibrant hues
Her favorite always bright red
I figured I’d nothing to lose
Saw scarlet above a male head.

Under the bright red umbrella
Whilst all around poured down the rain
I giddily kissed some fella
An attempt to forget my pain.

November 3, 2018
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Allison Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 12:58 PM
such a moving poem Cindi and a very different take on the theme, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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November 14, 2018 at 11:40 AM
- A wonderful winning poem, Cindi :) - I wish to congratulate you, well deserved :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rockwell Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 1:27 PM
Thank you! And thank you for taking the time to read it and comment! ~Cindi
Roper Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 11:03 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Cindi, you had everything I was looking for. Great flow, rhyme and subject matter . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
Rockwell Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 11:06 PM
Thank you for an inspirational subject!! ~Cindi
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November 4, 2018 at 12:21 PM
How cleverly you work the first stanza into your ending. Even in the midst of grief, life goes on and there's always another fella to be found. I sincerely hope you didn't lose your mother, Cindi. Best wishes for success in the contest! (It looked like Paris to me as well.) Hugs, Carolyn
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November 4, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Thank you! Haven’t been to Paris for 40 years, but I still dream! My mother passed 10 years ago last week but it always feels like yesterday.
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