Under the Banyan

“ memory is my journal, that I carry around with me always”

No tiny doves fluttered in the air
There was peace everywhere...
The call of the peacock in the woods
Breaking the mighty stillness that broods
And I under the banyan keep’’’
Company to the shadows that sleep
**Only a soft drowsy humming
    From the timid pond is coming
Oh it is the giant bumble bee~~
All bedaubed resplendently
With yellow wings against the black ground^^^
Each stripe not large, not thin nor round
    Into the sunlight higher and higher
    It’s wings catching the sun’s fire”’
Until it rested on the chosen flower**
The grateful petals danced in their forest bower
 ++ The beauty of this long forgotten day
       Gladdens my heart all the way...
28/08/2011

By Tahera Mannan
For Constance’s “ A poem, please” contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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September 6, 2011 at 10:21 AM
Wish you a very very happy birthday~
Dietrich Avatar
September 4, 2011 at 9:43 PM
wow, how nice this is, Tahera. Congrats on the win I see you got. Hey, I wish I'd remembered you were Sept. girl too. I just commented to a birthday blog wishing dr. Ram and Charolotte happy birthday too! When is it again for you?
Ramsdale Avatar
September 3, 2011 at 3:53 AM
A Fourth Place Win Congratulations. CR
Ramage Avatar
August 31, 2011 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your win, nice to remember long forgotten days. Lee
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 7:50 PM
Lovely poem!!!!!!!!!congratulations on our win!!!!!!!---Lori
Sweetheart Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 4:31 PM
Congrats Tahera on an excellent win with this magnificent poetry my sweet friend.. I simply luv this piece .. so soft and romantic too..luv..
Neels Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 2:50 PM
Hey there Tahera, congratulations on your win in the contest ;) love Wilma
Onclaud Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 1:44 PM
hun, you mesmerize me! congrats on a well deserved glowing award! grrreat stuff... : ) huggs
Taylor Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Congrats on your win, Tahera. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv Ralph
Williams Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 11:07 AM
hey Tahera, congrats on your win, loved it...David
Brown Avatar
August 30, 2011 at 10:26 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Constance's "A Poem, Please" contest Tahera. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 10:40 PM
Wonderful imagery here Tahera...enjoyed.Best wishes.
Sweetheart Avatar
August 29, 2011 at 11:59 AM
a lovely creation Tahera my friend ..filled with beautiful imagery and visuals luv.. good luck in the contest.. luv your quote.. awesome..
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