Under Shroud

Again a cosy snuggly night came With some cosy sweet memories Cosy memories reminding like horrible reminder Reminding me conservative thinking of you Still memorising ur name's alphabets It's slaying inside part of my body Cosy night again fooling me Jerked me back... How I wait of u in my porch For one sweet glimpse.... Is that day come again?? Feeling like m coverd by ur arm And in ur..I keep on relieving my pain Enduring ur tightness Broken pieces stick back Memories are now loosing colour itself black black black black.......... Body is under shroud drenched with unstoppable tears Stop borne!! Inevitable to know,riddle to the world...

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/7/2024 9:50:00 PM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poetprentice Dupins

Date: 4/4/2017 8:16:00 AM

I can feel the pain of missing that special one throughout this poem. I like your line "Reminding me conservative thinking of you..." At least to me, it captures the feeling of trying not to think of that someone so much. Great write Umme and welcome to poetrysoup!