Under Red Umbrella

Under Red Umbrella

               Two sisters under freshening rain showers
               smelt breeze carrying sweet scent of wet flowers
                      holding high a scarlet Red Umbrella
                       walked hand in hand little Cinderella
                         caressed by older Isabella.
                     Rain-soaked moist ambient embowers.

    11/03/18            
                            First Place
   'The Red Umbrella' Contest by Eve Roper
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Kendrick Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Sara
Dutta Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 12:15 PM
Thanks Sara for visit n appreciation
Allison Avatar
November 17, 2018 at 12:31 PM
what a lovely take on the contest theme Anisha, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
November 20, 2018 at 12:14 PM
Thanks JAN. Love.
Mitra Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 3:48 AM
This poem was a different take.. siblings in love and hugs.. congratulations
Dutta Avatar
November 14, 2018 at 5:43 AM
Reminding me childhood of my two daughters. Thanks for visit. Blessing
Roper Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 10:43 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Anisha, you had everything I was looking for great flow and rhyme. Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve
Dutta Avatar
November 13, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Thank you Eve. Winning a top position in your contest I am feeling really honored. Regards n Love.
Ajmal Avatar
November 5, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Ahh, such a lovely poem this is, simply a pleasure to read, I wish you best of luck in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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