Under Pressure

Pressure underground
Hungry stomach rumbling sound…
Oil drops raining down
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
March 11, 2011 at 1:06 AM
WAs reading your commenters below. Looks like one guy got it right and one did not. Hmmm, it does sound ike a stomach's rumbling sound!
Tacito Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Wow...damn this was on point. Well done sir!
Mehta Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:16 AM
meaningful thought with apt images on the oil leakage crisis, Robb
Parker Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 7:03 AM
A concise, descriptive expose on an emerging oil well. I think that 'Oil Well' would be the perfect title. Enjoyed your not so trite write.
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