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Under Pressure

Pressure underground Hungry stomach rumbling sound… Oil drops raining down

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 3/11/2011 1:06:00 AM
WAs reading your commenters below. Looks like one guy got it right and one did not. Hmmm, it does sound ike a stomach's rumbling sound!
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Date: 3/9/2011 7:42:00 AM
Wow...damn this was on point. Well done sir!
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Date: 3/9/2011 7:16:00 AM
meaningful thought with apt images on the oil leakage crisis, Robb
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Date: 3/9/2011 7:03:00 AM
A concise, descriptive expose on an emerging oil well. I think that 'Oil Well' would be the perfect title. Enjoyed your not so trite write.
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