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Under Pressure

Shoulders heavy and strain. Thoughts of being proper in my brain. Keep holding them up as they say my name. This world cannot be tamed. The weight is heavy and unbearable. Weakening my tested status. Making me become another Atlas Painful suffering without a cure. How much longer can I endure? Feeling so insecure. My life is obscure. Am I doomed to hold fast? For I fear that I will not last. For if I fail, I’ll drown my sorrows. To relieve the stress, as follows. By grabbing a bottle of hollows. For my ever-unquenchable swallows. Tricking my mind with thoughts of tomorrows. I must not let go and for some, depend on me like the Apollos. For I require more strength and inspiration to borrow.

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Date: 2/14/2024 6:51:00 AM
Your poem, Vanessa, is searing call of endurance in the face of decline. Memorable lines like, "to relieve the stress as follows/By grabbing a bottle of hollows/For my ever-unquenchable swallows." Remarkable rhymes, with powerful thoughts. Very fine writing indeed. Be well. Brian
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Date: 2/7/2024 7:37:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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