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Pierre Édouard Frère French Painter - Under My Umbrella

“A prayer of thanks: God, I asked you for a flower and you gave me a bouquet. I asked you for a friend, someone that would stay. You gave me someone like no other. I didn’t expect someone as wonderful as my brother.” By the poet. This is me on my way to school. Oh that’s my brother, he is slow, but not a fool. He is my big brother, but still a little kid. Kids don’t tease him. I would make trouble if they did. He is sweet and kind, though he breaks my toys. He won’t play with any of the other boys. Jeremy stays around me, when he is not learning. Some silly girls are afraid of him, that’s most concerning. My friends all like Jeremy, and he likes them too. I think they all know, not to like him, just would not do. Sometimes at home, he gets all the attention. More love, kisses and cuddles, I guess I shouldn’t mention. Sometimes I think I was born, for Jeremy, for me to look after, When I say this to my parents they answer with laughter. I have had to grow up fast. Jeremy gets bigger, but he stays a little kid. I will be glad when I am seven at last. I wish he grew smarter like I did. I love my brother and we will always be together. I will always be a good sister and look after him forever. Well, here we are at the school gate, I hurry to take him to his class so I don’t get in trouble, for being late.

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Date: 9/25/2023 12:03:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely winning poem, S.V. :) - hugs
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Date: 9/25/2023 1:48:00 PM
Thanks so much dear Anne-Lise.
Date: 9/25/2023 6:36:00 AM
Hearty congratulations on your trophy win, dear, SV. Your poem is so well composed and the picture is well portrayed with your well picked words.
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:36:00 AM
Thank you so much dear friend. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 9/24/2023 10:52:00 PM
I love this word-picture you painted it has a very personal feel, so enjoyable.. we all long for such meaningful relationships. Congratulations:))
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:36:00 AM
Thank you Sam, glad I was able to bring some realism into the picture. Your kind words were appreciated.
Date: 9/24/2023 10:33:00 PM
I love the different take and the beautiful sentiments expressed from the child mature beyond her years - wonderful story telling in poem form as always x
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Date: 9/25/2023 7:35:00 AM
Thanks D Glad you liked it.
Date: 9/24/2023 8:52:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Speaks Volumes. Wonderful Quote. I like that you this poem a different meaning of the heart. Great job. Many blessings to you
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Date: 9/24/2023 9:46:00 PM
Thank you firstly for holding such an interesting contest and secondly for the placement you gave my poem. I have read most of the winners, and I can see why you gave so many winners awards. You inspired a myriad of very beautiful poems Eve. Congratulations to YOU. Best wishes SV
Date: 9/1/2023 12:53:00 PM
- A different sibling life ... the world is not just black or white, everyday life has many shades ... a poem that evokes strong emotions, S.V. - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 9/3/2023 5:32:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise, it can be an emotional topic. The sibling of a challenged brother or sister has a different role to play to most siblings. Your comment as always is appreciated.
Date: 8/31/2023 6:54:00 PM
Heartfelt! My granddaughters have a stepsister who was shaken as a baby by her father (in jail). So she will never speak and never mature but she will be loved.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/1/2023 5:18:00 AM
A whole family is affected. I want to throw my arms around “the brother,” just reading your comment.
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Date: 8/31/2023 7:10:00 PM
For many years before they moved to Perth I was one of the volunteers who helped with a little brain damaged baby and then little girl. It was her older brother that I always felt sorry for. He was just a lil fella and always pushed aside. He grew into a fine young man. Thanks for your comment Kim.

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