Vladislav Raven Poet Rhyme

Under Luna's Smile - a Collaboration With Pandita

Oh, Luna, in thy glory smile,
as love's most beautiful wonder, I now hold,
where we two do embrace, do linger awhile,
in your silver beams, our love is told.
My most beautiful dream, I now hold in my arms,
what glory divine, shall now come to me,
under your love-light, we shall share love's charms,
my Latina wonder, our love, Luna does see.

Lovely Luna, divine Goddess, shining bright,
drape us with your grace and awesome splendour.
Beam your Heavenly love-light on us tonight,
binding our hearts within love's tender surrender.
Merging in this moment, we're immortal and strong,
with the ancient stars, we're one...one body, one heart.
We embrace and dance to your mystical song,
under your smile, Luna, never we two shall part.

It has been both an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with you again Pandita. Your gentle words give the piece its soul. |You pen is ever running gold. Love and Hugs....Mike. XX

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Heidi Sands November 5, 2019 at 10:01 PM This is a beautiful and enjoyable collaboration. Congratulations to the both of you! :) Vladislav Raven November 8, 2019 at 8:25 AM Hi Heidi, my apologies for not being around for a while. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration. It is much appreciated. we are so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to share ink with Pandita. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Richard Lamoureux November 4, 2019 at 8:19 AM You two have chemistry when you write together. Next level poetry my friend. Vladislav Raven November 8, 2019 at 8:11 AM Hi Richard, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are glad you liked the piece. It is always a pleasure and an honour to collaborate with Pandita. Have a wonderful Friday. Blessings....Mike.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 27, 2019 at 1:24 PM - A wonderful poem, my friends Mike & Pandita :) - Romantic and divine :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vladislav Raven November 8, 2019 at 7:59 AM Hi Anne-Lise, sorry it has taken me a little while to respond. Thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. We are so glad you liked the piece. It is always an honour and a pleasure to collaborate with Pandita. Have a wonderful Friday. Hugs....Mike. XX

Gershon Wolf October 26, 2019 at 9:01 PM Just a lovely, delightful plea and paean to Luna. Entrancing and enthralling, Mike. Kudos to you and Pandita! Warmest wishes, Gershon Vladislav Raven November 8, 2019 at 7:51 AM Hi Gershon, thank you for dropping by and the comment on our collaboration, it is much appreciated. we are glad you liked the piece. It is always a pleasure and an honour to collaborate with Pandita. Have a wonderful Friday. Your friend....Mike.