Under Lock and Key

The eyeglass store’s brand new; it moved
From just across the street.
The stock is current, fresh and cool;
Displays are nice and neat.

But unlike some establishments, 
Its style is from the past.
The frames are under lock and key,
Although the choice is vast.

So every time I saw one
I’d consider for myself,
A store employee with a key’d
Unlock the drawer or shelf.

He’d watch me as I’d try it on
And wait for my decision.
My interest waned beneath the weight
Of constant supervision.

In other shops the customer
Is left to his devices
To try on every single pair
That possibly entices.

I left the store with my old glasses
Perched upon my face.
My search will now continue
At a far more trusting place.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Murray Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 6:32 PM
I agree it is off putting. Well put Ilene.
Lamoureux Avatar
June 22, 2016 at 7:08 AM
Ha ha, I totally agree with you. The price was probably high as well.
Allison Avatar
June 21, 2016 at 4:59 PM
Such a sad reflection of the times we live in Ilene:-( hugs Jan xx
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