Hemi Lewis Poet Verse

Under a Tree

Under a tree the leaves fall
Around a dark blue the tree is tall
Upon the tree the truth falls
Into a dark lake beyond the darkness
But the truth will rise and be strong 
When you see the light within the tree
You will see the light is the way to go and
Leave the dark path alone 

A poem from my 12 year old son

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raven artlyy September 8, 2026 at 8:21 AM I've really been enjoying your poem and the emotions and imagery were so vivid that i could easily picture them as beautiful illustration. I'm a commission-based manga/webtoon artist, and I'd love to help bring your story to life if you're ever interested. Feel free to reach out at gm@il : akiracomicart2@ or on inst@ akiraa_artly

Beata Agustin February 14, 2024 at 1:27 AM Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A February 5, 2016 at 2:47 PM Hemi, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV ** LINDA

Carol Sunshine Brown July 27, 2011 at 1:11 PM Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry today Hemi's Son. I enjoyed reading it and will be back again soon to read more. Love, Carol