Under a Halo Circle

You're the fountain 
that fills the eyes of a desert spring 

Water of loving life 
existing purely divine saviour 

As it flows through the veins 
breathless oxygen mixed with h2o 

Inside a deep well wishing by magic 
an apparition appears in a baby blue light 

Echoing with a passion ringing 
inside heavens bells rejoicing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
June 7, 2016 at 6:18 PM
so uplifting Liam a beautiful poem:-) hugs jan xx
Trifiatis Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 7:53 AM
Captivating and imaginative, my friend, Liam! Superbly written!
Haikutwinkle Avatar
June 6, 2016 at 1:57 AM
Reading back your past poems.... your style has changed much... and now you are flexing your muscles for more..... pretty fascinating with what you learn through collaborations.
Fiery Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:39 PM
This is simply breathtaking ! I would agree with what Tim has already mentioned..Enchanting Love ! A7 from me ~Cheers ~Red
Smith Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:31 PM
You write of an enchanting love Liam...lovely poem
Petersen Potter Avatar
June 5, 2016 at 9:17 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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