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Under a Halo Circle

You're the fountain that fills the eyes of a desert spring Water of loving life existing purely divine saviour As it flows through the veins breathless oxygen mixed with h2o Inside a deep well wishing by magic an apparition appears in a baby blue light Echoing with a passion ringing inside heavens bells rejoicing

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/7/2016 6:18:00 PM

so uplifting Liam a beautiful poem:-) hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/6/2016 7:53:00 AM

Captivating and imaginative, my friend, Liam! Superbly written!

Angeline Haikutwinkle

Date: 6/6/2016 1:57:00 AM

Reading back your past poems.... your style has changed much... and now you are flexing your muscles for more..... pretty fascinating with what you learn through collaborations.

Red Fiery

Date: 6/5/2016 9:39:00 PM

This is simply breathtaking ! I would agree with what Tim has already mentioned..Enchanting Love ! A7 from me ~Cheers ~Red

Tim Smith

Date: 6/5/2016 9:31:00 PM

You write of an enchanting love Liam...lovely poem

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 6/5/2016 9:17:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Just amazing!So wonderful!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^