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Under a Bridge of Tears

We each and everyone have scar tissue 
laid deeply etched internal conflict hides dialogue

All battles are fought against love condemned un-fairly 
hate tortures all good reasoning over trowing truth

Firstly cursing madness stands as judge 
corrupted fibres removes stitches darned incorrectly

As the tree of life bears fruit from it's branches 
seeds upon this earth has been planted

Like a snowflake born from the living waters of life 
unique in how each of us is constructed underneath

Our souls are immortal holding a frame within time 
the body is merely a temple nourished by golden light

Countdown begins under a corrupted crop sewing lies 
seeing is believing where chastisement begs pardon under oath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 12/27/2017 2:09:00 PM
Could not pen it better or even equally Liam...well done you . . . Happy Christmas mate and many more good ones due to you
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Date: 12/23/2017 9:31:00 AM
Beautiful work Liam! Can't wait to explore more of your work
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Date: 12/20/2017 3:27:00 PM
Liam, unique and beautifully written; your pen shone with light!
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Date: 12/20/2017 5:42:00 AM
In a frame, in time... A conscious poem...Enjoyed it Liam... All the best
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Date: 12/20/2017 2:20:00 AM
Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all,Liam.It breaks my heart to know of all the bad things happening in this world.These are the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take very good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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