Under a Bridge of Tears

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We each and everyone have scar tissue laid deeply etched internal conflict hides dialogue All battles are fought against love condemned un-fairly hate tortures all good reasoning over trowing truth Firstly cursing madness stands as judge corrupted fibres removes stitches darned incorrectly As the tree of life bears fruit from it's branches seeds upon this earth has been planted Like a snowflake born from the living waters of life unique in how each of us is constructed underneath Our souls are immortal holding a frame within time the body is merely a temple nourished by golden light Countdown begins under a corrupted crop sewing lies seeing is believing where chastisement begs pardon under oath

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Peter Walsh

Date: 12/27/2017 2:09:00 PM

Could not pen it better or even equally Liam...well done you . . . Happy Christmas mate and many more good ones due to you

Kudzai Mhangwa

Date: 12/23/2017 9:31:00 AM

Beautiful work Liam! Can't wait to explore more of your work

Donna Loughman

Date: 12/20/2017 3:27:00 PM

Liam, unique and beautifully written; your pen shone with light!

Arturo Michael

Date: 12/20/2017 5:42:00 AM

In a frame, in time... A conscious poem...Enjoyed it Liam... All the best

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/20/2017 2:20:00 AM

Hi Liam!:))Wow! This is a very powerful, outstanding poem you've written here my dearest friend Liam.All so beautifully penned with truth n' caring.Very heartfelt!This world is a total mess in all,Liam.It breaks my heart to know of all the bad things happening in this world.These are the last days according to the Bible, Liam.Prayers are very powerful, n' we need to pray more for everyone n' everything, Liam.Another very beautiful sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen. Just awesome!A true glowing gem!Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7+++ ++!A Fav!Take very good care!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything.Please keep positive n' very strong.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers,Liam.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^