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Undefeated

I can take more than you can dish out Charge me full-bore And see what I’m talking about Find yourself head first in the ground Without a sound Not even a peep From the weak surrounding me Strength is my only option left Everyone else tried their best Before giving up, I guess The power within me Will give me the will to be Stronger than he or she Two against one, few against many The battle has begun But the war is never ending Hell man! You think you can understand How the world just keeps repeating? Think you have your "stones" in hand Ready to take on the master plan? You must be kidding! At one time I was slang’in Eight-ball’in and gang-bang’in Roll’in hard, liv’in high The one that could not be outdone Takes the title & packs up his guns -- And you wanna know why? – ‘Cause life is do or die! And there comes a day when you have to say Good-bye……and walk away (undefeated) -Boz- My entry for Christophers Shedding my Skin contest

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Date: 8/30/2009 5:10:00 AM
Jackie congrats on placing in Chris's contest -God Bless, mj
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Date: 8/26/2009 11:16:00 AM
Love the end here ... smile ... great writing and congratulations Jackie on your win in Christopher's contest !!
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Date: 8/24/2009 1:00:00 PM
Well done, and well deserving a win in Chris's contest! an inspiring poem!~ Carrie
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:44:00 PM
Thank you all for your generous comments. And thank you for all the support and encouragement you have offered. I wish everyone the best and God bless! -Jackie
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Date: 8/24/2009 12:24:00 PM
I think I was almost put in a poetry club and I was thinking of snapping! This was a lovely poem deserving of being spoken out loud. Very nice! Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest.
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Date: 8/24/2009 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Christopher's contest Jackie. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/24/2009 7:44:00 AM
Thank you for entering the contest..Congrats.
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