Undecided

Sitting on top of the world and I'm beside myself 
trying to concerntrate on what I'm doing but I just can't lose myself
I love u too much I know
my feelings can help but grow 
my hearts going crazy and I lose contol

I want to take a chance but I feel afraid 
I see your faltering smile and I feel ashamed
your eyes they linger and my heart skips a beat
too proud to show it but I'm down at your feet 

But it's not over Ive still got a chance
we still have that one final dance
too make it right to make it okay
I won't lose you not today
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 11:19 AM
Thank you for your sopportive comments on my last, please check out my recent Criminals part 3 of course Fiction. Have a great day.
Nutter Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 2:51 AM
Interesting write, able to feel the need through your words.
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