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Sitting on top of the world and I'm beside myself trying to concerntrate on what I'm doing but I just can't lose myself I love u too much I know my feelings can help but grow my hearts going crazy and I lose contol I want to take a chance but I feel afraid I see your faltering smile and I feel ashamed your eyes they linger and my heart skips a beat too proud to show it but I'm down at your feet But it's not over Ive still got a chance we still have that one final dance too make it right to make it okay I won't lose you not today

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Date: 7/12/2010 11:19:00 AM
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Date: 7/12/2010 2:51:00 AM
Interesting write, able to feel the need through your words.
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