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Undead Point of Veiw

I am Insignificant, Incomplete Never happy with defeat I live because I am Dead on broken feet I Stare at you with lifeless eyes Rotten face with broken jaw. Hurt me more. It never dies. Tear me in half and I just crawl. A unholy, consuming appetite. Burning pain without a cure. Flesh, Bones and Brain delight Don't judge me We are all impure. We are many, We are all Thousands hunger after you You can not run, Your life is through Close your eyes and say goodbye

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/29/2011 1:17:00 PM
Thanks for the correction, This was for an English project and you just saved me a couple points.
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Date: 4/28/2011 10:52:00 AM
in the paragraph hurt me more it never dyes. the words should be spelt "dies". ;) breath taking write. very well penned.
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