Uncontrollable

uncontrollable 
                                     overflowing embankment 
                                            lunacy fires
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Marie Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 10:17 PM
You excel at powerful imagery in so few words. Incredibly writing, always a pleasure to read and be moved by such a gifted writer. blessings, lynn
Devnath  Avatar
August 13, 2016 at 4:50 PM
Thanks for your uplifting comment my friend. Hugs Cloudy poet
Gazbowski Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Excellent 3 liner, BK.
Devnath  Avatar
June 11, 2016 at 9:35 AM
If limit is crossed feed back is must in every cases in this world. Thanks my lovely beautiful friend. Loved always, bl
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2016 at 6:47 PM
Great analogy of an uncontrollable fire as lunacy!
Devnath  Avatar
June 10, 2016 at 9:25 AM
Thanks my lovely smiling friend for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl
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