Notes About The Poem

Written, August 28, 2024
For The Contest, This or That, Vol 27  
“Unconscious Bias”
Sponsor, Edward Ibeh  ~ 2nd Place

2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 18 Poetry Contest 
Sponsor, Mark Toney 
Entered, September 21, 2025 NA

 

Unconscious Bias


      Unconscious bias can upset one's heart
if kin or friends might shun your written art-
     to look upon good poetry as play-
negating words that might uplift their day.

     Some think of poetry as silly writes
that jumble words and do not meet the rights
     to be upheld as literary worth-
with any thoughtful meanings to unearth.

     Perhaps poetic metaphors give pause
and render writers void of earned applause.
     Ambiguity somehow dismisses sense;
unconscious bias- inborn to commence.

     Most poets may unveil views quite obscure
that sometimes deems their sanity unsure
     by those who harbor this unconscious fact-
and hold back ways by which they should react.

     We're thankful other poets read our art
with no unconscious bias on their part.
     They understand the nuances displayed
in chosen thoughts so artfully conveyed.
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Ibeh Avatar
September 27, 2024 at 6:53 AM
Powerful and insightful piece, Sandra. Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest!
Rodgers Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 8:43 AM
Dear Sandra, You did display such art and conveyed your message so well. I enjoyed reading your poem and as a counselor, we are always trying to recognize if we have unconscious bias going on or not. Sometimes it is pointed out to us. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Empress Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 7:53 AM
Dear sandra, this is such a wise and profound take on unconscious bias, which is so common and true it can hurt friends and family when one is receives such bias. And its clever of you to use it in the aspect of poetry and how so many assume and judge , special are the ones that read with an open heart and welcome all. Pleasure reading this, sending you light always
Cunningham Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 9:37 PM
Thought provoking verse Sandra, perfect for the contest, good luck. Tom
Haight Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 6:48 AM
Thank you, Tom, for stopping by to read my poem. I appreciate your encouraging comment! Sandra
Onclaud Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 7:05 PM
remarkable verse honoring the importance of poetry.. this is awesome, sandra!
Haight Avatar
August 29, 2024 at 6:49 AM
Thank you, Nette. I am grateful for your very uplifting comment! Hugs, Sandra
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