Unconfined

As our golden years began,
you and I made a pact.
In youth we once soared high,
but now our skin is cracked
and our best years seem hijacked.

When I was diagnosed with illness,
you were the first person I called
and I marveled at your stillness.
You didn’t phone for weeks; I was appalled,
being tossed away by one who’s fat and bald.

Looking for a replacement after four years.
the next day you were on dating sites,
Is your tired old photo being met there by cheers?
Pact-breaker, this just bites!
I won’t be there when they give you last rites.

Any woman you find won’t stay with you long;
sarcastic cheaters stay with their kind.
Perhaps another innocent will come along,
but your whiskey and alcohol she’ll leave behind.
Yours is the fate of one who by a pact won’t be confined.



*Pact poem for Paula’s contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Maverick Avatar
December 30, 2012 at 8:13 AM
Well who needs this type anyway Carolyn?? you see how well you did Gettin me all fired up there for a bit ;even on my 2nd visit.." Hope the new year finds you well, And I wish Gods blessings to you in Abundance..! Joe..)
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September 20, 2012 at 7:53 AM
A great poem here Carolyn!Missing your poetry!!How are you?
Lu Avatar
May 12, 2012 at 9:54 AM
nicely expressed from the depth. Cindy
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May 9, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Best wishes in the contest Carolyn with this cutting edge write.Joe..."
Austin Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 2:08 PM
Hey! That fat, bald s.o.b. will get his one of these days. He threw away a diamond for a zircon. LOve, daver
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May 9, 2012 at 8:24 AM
like lizzle below, wow! Carolyn, this is up there with your best. got to be a winner. to my fav to join heaps of others of yours. love, Harry
Wesley Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 8:08 AM
Wow, this one bites deep Carolyn; cheaters never prosper. Makes me wonder if this was your experience or is it just a poem. I find there are a lot of personal experiences in our poetry which in the writing might be cathartic. Thanks for sharing luv and hope you are doing ok _ Lizzie
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May 7, 2012 at 7:04 PM
just like i said ; love from begining to end.
Williams Avatar
May 6, 2012 at 3:00 AM
Carolyn, a painful episode, but not as painful as what you are going through, good luck, how is your health hun...David
Roberts Avatar
May 5, 2012 at 4:31 PM
good luck in the contest with scathing reprimand Carolyn
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