Adell Foster Poet Verse

Unconditionally (Reversed-Verse)

I love -- though there be imperfections…
For I am not quite perfected yet; 
Still I am striving to be… as sweet confections
Without griping or regret
Loving unconditionally
--Yes--
Loving unconditionally
Without griping or regret
Still I am striving to be … as sweet confections
For I am not quite perfected yet;
I love-- though there be imperfections…

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Sharon Winter August 1, 2008 at 7:41 AM Wow Adell. This is an awesome write! You are so talented and especially so with this style. Love how it works both ways, differently! Truly excellent. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan July 31, 2008 at 3:31 PM Interesting form - A gem of a poem - Loved the form and the message - God Bless

Joseph Spence Sr July 31, 2008 at 11:40 AM I just love this poem. It makes my heart smile. You should post this one in "Divorce Court." This really says a lot. Great job! ~Joseph