Unconditional Love

I gave you love 
Without condition
Held you close
Beneath my wing
Took you high
And helped you sing
Guided you through
Stormy weather
Tickled you
With my feather
Cheered you up
When you were down
Never let you
Hit the ground
Danced with you
In the rain
With my tears
I wiped your pain
But now it’s time
You took the reins
As I take flight
To tranquil plains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/31/2013 1:23:00 PM
i SEE WHY YOU LIKED MY POEM LOVE YOU HAVE SOME SOUP MAIL MY FRIEND HOPE YOU WELL XXX DAVIDSCOTT
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 11/1/2013 5:14:00 PM
Thank you David, that's what love is all about XXX
Date: 1/30/2013 11:58:00 AM
ANOTHER GREAT WRITE SOUNDS LIKE YOU GIVE YOUR HEART ALOT AND THE OTHER PERSON GAV NOTHING BACK SELVISH LOVER X DAVIDSCOTT
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Date: 1/29/2013 7:41:00 AM
Neat structure, rhyming and exceptional language! Well done Elizabeth!! Love, Keith
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/29/2013 10:43:00 AM
Thank you Keith, love Elizabeth
Date: 1/27/2013 8:14:00 AM
NICE FLOW GOOD JOB
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Elizabeth O'Driscoll
Date: 1/27/2013 2:33:00 PM
Thank you Autry, love Elizabeth
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