Unconditional Charlieku

parents release
tiresome grip
let go

kisses fly forth
in giggles
from lips

wings of angels
strung around
my neck

pearlescent glow
twinkling eyes
of grands

synergetic
euphoric
sweet love

10/11/2018

Charlieku 4-3-2 Contest/Charles Messina
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October 25, 2018 at 10:35 PM
Sorry so late, I love these Kim. Thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win...Charlie
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2018 at 8:33 PM
Kim, congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest..
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October 24, 2018 at 8:31 AM
Beautiful haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your great win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Dietrich Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 11:56 PM
Just lovely, KIM. Congrats on the win
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:04 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Allison Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 3:15 PM
Absolutely charming Kim!Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Gauthier Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 10:36 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2018 at 7:03 AM
Thank you, Line!
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October 23, 2018 at 2:22 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Kim :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 6:02 AM
Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise! Hugs...Kim
Wolf Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:02 PM
Here's to the unconditional, heartfelt and pure love of grandparents. Excellent 'Charlieku.' ~ Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Raven Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 5:58 AM
Hi Kim, a wonderful group of Charlieku you array before us. One can see the unconditional love within your words. The love shines. I am a lover of Haiku and i fave as many as I can. I have enjoyed this read. This wonderful group goes into my faves. Good luck in the contest Kim. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
Rodrigues Avatar
October 13, 2018 at 7:24 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! :):)
Godwin Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 10:16 AM
Entirely delightful! CayCay
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Thanks so much, dear friend!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 6:38 PM
This deserves to be in the winner's circle, Kim. Of course, I LOVE poems about our grandchildren.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 12, 2018 at 9:07 PM
Thanks! The love is unconditional!
Green Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 10:43 AM
Another beautiful poem Kim and it definitely describes a grandchild to a tee.
Rodrigues Avatar
October 11, 2018 at 10:49 AM
Love my grands! Thanks, Chris!
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