Unconditional Charlieku

parents release
tiresome grip
let go

kisses fly forth
in giggles
from lips

wings of angels
strung around
my neck

pearlescent glow
twinkling eyes
of grands

synergetic
euphoric
sweet love

10/11/2018

Charlieku 4-3-2 Contest/Charles Messina

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Date: 10/25/2018 10:35:00 PM
Sorry so late, I love these Kim. Thanks for entering my contest and Congratulations on your win...Charlie
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Date: 10/24/2018 8:33:00 PM
Kim, congratulations on your great win in this Haiku contest..
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Date: 10/24/2018 8:31:00 AM
Beautiful haiku, Kim. Congratulations on your great win in the contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Carolyn!
Date: 10/23/2018 11:56:00 PM
Just lovely, KIM. Congrats on the win
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 7:04:00 AM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 10/23/2018 3:15:00 PM
Absolutely charming Kim!Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, dear friend!
Date: 10/23/2018 10:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2018 7:03:00 AM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 10/23/2018 2:22:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great Charlieku, Kim :) - Have a nice Tuesday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/23/2018 6:02:00 AM
Thank you, sweet Anne-Lise! Hugs...Kim
Date: 10/15/2018 12:02:00 PM
Here's to the unconditional, heartfelt and pure love of grandparents. Excellent 'Charlieku.' ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/15/2018 12:33:00 PM
Thank you, Gershon!
Date: 10/13/2018 5:58:00 AM
Hi Kim, a wonderful group of Charlieku you array before us. One can see the unconditional love within your words. The love shines. I am a lover of Haiku and i fave as many as I can. I have enjoyed this read. This wonderful group goes into my faves. Good luck in the contest Kim. Have a wonderful Saturday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/13/2018 7:24:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike! :):)
Date: 10/12/2018 10:16:00 AM
Entirely delightful! CayCay
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2018 9:07:00 PM
Thanks so much, dear friend!
Date: 10/11/2018 6:38:00 PM
This deserves to be in the winner's circle, Kim. Of course, I LOVE poems about our grandchildren.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/12/2018 9:07:00 PM
Thanks! The love is unconditional!
Date: 10/11/2018 10:43:00 AM
Another beautiful poem Kim and it definitely describes a grandchild to a tee.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/11/2018 10:49:00 AM
Love my grands! Thanks, Chris!
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