Unconcious Conciousness

Like it has been said before "A dream within a dream"
Again has brought me back, back to this rippling stream
No wild life, only trees, no wind
Just me alone there with my sin
OH! How unlucky I am to be stuck within

Sal F. Manela
Rippling Stream
6/4/11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 5, 2011 at 6:52 PM
Sal, nice philosophy.. a dream stuck in a dream. wow! to feel trapped in every angle.. your a great poet. take care,..p.d.
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