Unconcious Conciousness
Like it has been said before "A dream within a dream"
Again has brought me back, back to this rippling stream
No wild life, only trees, no wind
Just me alone there with my sin
OH! How unlucky I am to be stuck within
Sal F. Manela
Rippling Stream
6/4/11
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