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to succeed at something, anything is quite a rare feat failure is a more common outcome, defeat, but lessons are learned so if you want to get ahead in the world court failure *Since nette said metered feet was alright [which are not anatomical feet] I was hoping FEAT would be ok too since it is pronounced fEEt Poet: Debbie Guzzi Contest: On Your Feet

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Date: 2/2/2012 3:22:00 AM
Interesting take on the theme.Congrats Debi on your win.
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Date: 2/2/2012 2:47:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie x
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Date: 2/1/2012 6:59:00 PM
It all makes sense to me! No feat in this world in which we don't move with our feet! Congrats, Ms. Debbie! Thanks for your kind comments and sweet message of felicitations! God bless!
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Date: 2/1/2012 3:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your interesting way of doing the contest, Debs. I really enjoyed this one (a thinking sijo!)
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:40:00 AM
congrats on your win in my contest, debbie... was waiting for some revisions but this turned out to be unique as well!..;) huggs!
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Date: 2/1/2012 11:07:00 AM
Words to live by Debbie. Congrats
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Date: 2/1/2012 9:38:00 AM
congrats Debbie on a grand win for these expressive lines.. all too true.. failure continually makes us try till success is evident luv.. super one..
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Date: 2/1/2012 5:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "On Your Feet" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:09:00 AM
It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Debbie. I hope that you might be able to find the time to continue reading some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/30/2012 8:58:00 PM
well, I sure hope she accepts it because I think it was very clever, the poem and the idea!!!
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