Uncle

An uncle through family A fake person you see He's not a straight shooter More gay then a gay Wishes he could ride your scooter Loves to be on his knees All over your ass more then fleas If you ever met him You would agree Nothing real about him Not even his hair Wanted to be an heir Took advantage His dying brother, I swear Not even shedding a tear His time will come So he better prepare When it does I will declare I'll bang a drum And not in dispair So I'll take this time Even though you're a scum To say goodbye, good riddance Alleluia , Amen

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Letitia Alvarez

Date: 7/31/2011 10:06:00 PM

You know what? It just dawned on me what you meant in your comment about the fake uncle. I'm sorry! I missread what you wrote thinking that you were saying I wrote about an imaginary uncle. lol

Letitia Alvarez

Date: 7/14/2011 6:58:00 AM

It is about my real uncle. About how he took advantage of my dying father. He really is gay and a very hateful person.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 7/13/2011 6:38:00 PM

Very funny but realistic write on the fake uncle

Letitia Alvarez
Date: 7/31/2011 10:06:00 PM

You know what? It just dawned on me what you meant in your comment about the fake uncle. I'm sorry! I missread what you wrote thinking that you were saying I wrote about an imaginary uncle. lol Also excuse me as I am still learning how to use this site.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/13/2011 4:25:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Letitia. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol