unchained

none of your thick walls 
can succeed enslaving me ~
I'm an idea
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Hind Avatar
December 17, 2024 at 6:09 PM
A deep poem of few words
Empress Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 1:15 PM
Wow that last line is beautiful, “ im an idea” just love that, so much depth in your 3 lines woven in such a soulful manner, pleasure reading this
Dietrich Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 8:19 AM
Love this deep one
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 6:09 AM
Ohhh...what a brilliant Haiku! Love this! Looks like you are focusing on a few genres. Are you not participating in contests? In between my other writing-assignment, I am enjoying writing short poems like Tanka, Haiku or Monoku. Hope we stay in touch. Best wishes ~
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 9:09 AM
That’s excellent! Please follow your passion - I was working seriously on a memoir too!
Alex Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 7:10 AM
Glad to hear from you. In fact, I have been working on a collection of sonnets on Jesus. The work is in progress. It will take long time to do justice to it. I am working seriously.
Cunningham Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 4:48 AM
So true Christuraj, they can never enslave your mind or thoughts. Tom
Alex Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 7:10 AM
Thank you very much. May God Bless You!
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