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none of your thick walls can succeed enslaving me ~ I'm an idea

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Paige Hind

Date: 12/17/2024 6:09:00 PM

A deep poem of few words

Ink Empress

Date: 12/15/2024 1:15:00 PM

Wow that last line is beautiful, “ im an idea” just love that, so much depth in your 3 lines woven in such a soulful manner, pleasure reading this

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/15/2024 8:19:00 AM

Love this deep one

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 12/15/2024 6:09:00 AM

Ohhh...what a brilliant Haiku! Love this! Looks like you are focusing on a few genres. Are you not participating in contests? In between my other writing-assignment, I am enjoying writing short poems like Tanka, Haiku or Monoku. Hope we stay in touch. Best wishes ~

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 12/15/2024 9:09:00 AM

That’s excellent! Please follow your passion - I was working seriously on a memoir too!

Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/15/2024 7:10:00 AM

Glad to hear from you. In fact, I have been working on a collection of sonnets on Jesus. The work is in progress. It will take long time to do justice to it. I am working seriously.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/15/2024 4:48:00 AM

So true Christuraj, they can never enslave your mind or thoughts. Tom

Christuraj Alex
Date: 12/15/2024 7:10:00 AM

Thank you very much. May God Bless You!