Pipping Stars Poet Lyric

Unbroken Debt of Breaths

unbroken debt
of breaths


what should your death mean to me
not an other breath kept in secrecy
step a little deeper into me
never had a chance to
breathe
what
should your death
mean to me
whisper
with
your
life
anda let me see
my mouth is wide open
i can taste you bleed
take another breath
next one is on me
what should your death mean to me
in your acts of desperation you set me free
being born under water taught me to breathe
what should your death mean to me
a cracker jack prize
in
sanity
the blue ring ing
of
your lips
still breathing
is
a
mystery
what should
your love
mean
to
me
?


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8~15~17
conest U form 
used word 
"unbroken"
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Patricia Cresswell September 15, 2017 at 2:11 PM This piece has made me ponder, what would my death mean. As I am almost invisible to my family I am sure it would be a passing bump on their psychic journey. You see truthfullly I don't know. OMG it is the loneliest of feelings! Pipping Stars September 16, 2017 at 10:33 AM oh no ... please don't feel lonely ... it's only death ... huh ...

Eve Roper September 15, 2017 at 12:19 PM your lines are amazing, Timothy, "a cracker jack prize" l like this the best... for I feel like that sometimes.... Hugs Eve ~`* Pipping Stars September 15, 2017 at 12:49 PM lol ... right on ... been awile since a cracker jack prize made me smile ... hey ... where's jack the riper ... ha ha ... hey ... I really appreciate your thoughts on this piece ... thanks again ... you...