Thabang Ngoma Poet Verse

Unbroken Chains

unbroken chains hold my steer
over bruised knees bled dry
off my second hand adventure
throughout scarred elbows
unbroken chains hold my steer


no.6—Bike

Thabang Jan Ngoma
08-06-2015

Sponsor: nette onclaud
Contest Name: A PRIZED REFRAIN

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Anne-Lise Andresen August 18, 2015 at 1:16 PM - I'm a little late, but better late than never :) - Congratulations on your 7. place in the contest, Thabang - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Merryman August 17, 2015 at 10:09 PM Well done, Thabang! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Skat A August 17, 2015 at 3:19 PM a nice win... SKAT

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 17, 2015 at 8:28 AM Wow an amazing write Thabang! Congrats on big win!

Andrea Dietrich August 16, 2015 at 8:10 PM how nice you did one for bike. I loved my old bike too! Congrats on your win. Thabang Ngoma August 16, 2015 at 10:06 PM Thanks Andrea...this write was experimental...I like tryn' out new things to challenge myself (:heers, Tbang

Jan Allison August 16, 2015 at 4:00 PM Love your take of the image Thabang congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx Thabang Ngoma August 16, 2015 at 10:12 PM Hi Jan...many thanks, I still have scarres from those accidents, but it's all part of growing up (:heerd, Tbang