Unbreak Me.

Unbreak me from this cycle we are on.  Know that I am tired of the trials that I must endure.
Gone from this moment the desire the stick it out.  For broken I have become.  I need time 
to piece back my life.  To heal the broken heart you have created.  The time has come to 
say so long to the pain.  Carry away from me your hurt that you travel.  Gone from the 
tones of voices that shouted for release.  I walk away certain to become stronger than once 
was.  Greater journeys lay out before me.  I walk now to a new life, I embrace it with an 
open mind.  Unbreak me from your hold on me.  For I came along not knowing any better at 
the time.  Now I see clear the horizon.  It's mine for the taking.  let go and see how strong I 
can become.  For I shall grow beyond means that your know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 11/2/2009 5:56:00 PM
sadly moving, time heals, enjoyed reading your works!!
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Date: 4/9/2009 1:47:00 PM
Moving on is very hard. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing. And welcome to Poetry Soup.
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Date: 4/8/2009 1:27:00 PM
Hello Donna, welcome to the soupland. Keep on sharing your talent. Ernilando
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Date: 4/7/2009 7:05:00 PM
Smile~I love this write of Yours Donna~Not for the possible hurt or the pain which it conveys~yet for the power, hope and assuredness which it places forth!:) And also, I loved the soulful depth from which You expressed and penned it~for true jewels within writings creations are born from these places!:) And You wrote it so very well, through and through~welcome to the soup!:) Warmth To 'You & Yours,' John!":) Bye ~
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