Unbound


shroud of mist entombs
eerie silence takes a hold
~
sun hauls back those drapes


Written 14th January 2021

Contest Hi-Ku(7) place promise
Sponsor Brian Strand
10th Place

silencesunsurrealweatherhaiku

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Line Gauthier

March 22, 2021 at 6:58 AM

lovely images ~

Ann Gilmour

March 23, 2021 at 2:46 AM

thank you dearest Line x

Panagiota Romios

February 6, 2021 at 6:43 PM

Congratulations on placing...a fine Haiku Hugs, Panagiota and ^*^

Ann Gilmour

February 7, 2021 at 1:41 PM

Bless you dear Panagiouta and sweet Irene ^~^ for your congrats and hugs - oh I miss my hugs.... With love and hugs to you two xxxoooxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

January 15, 2021 at 12:05 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Ann :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour

January 18, 2021 at 4:38 AM

Dearest Anne-Lise thank you for your congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brian Sambourne

January 15, 2021 at 10:46 AM

I especially like this haiku. A memorable picture in the reader's mind. Best wishes, Brian

Ann Gilmour

January 18, 2021 at 4:38 AM

Thank you Brian for your lovely comments, much appreciated and nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

January 14, 2021 at 9:28 AM

I've been trying to learn to write haikus and invite you to my last effort. You are of course well verse on how to write them Good luck with the contest. ~~

Ann Gilmour

January 14, 2021 at 10:09 AM

How kind of you to say that Victor... You are such an accomplished poet I am sure you will achieve your goal my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx