Unbound

shroud of mist entombs eerie silence takes a hold ~ sun hauls back those drapes Written 14th January 2021 Contest Hi-Ku(7) place promise Sponsor Brian Strand 10th Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/22/2021 6:58:00 AM

lovely images ~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/23/2021 2:46:00 AM

thank you dearest Line x

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/6/2021 6:43:00 PM

Congratulations on placing...a fine Haiku Hugs, Panagiota and ^*^

Ann Gilmour
Date: 2/7/2021 1:41:00 PM

Bless you dear Panagiouta and sweet Irene ^~^ for your congrats and hugs - oh I miss my hugs.... With love and hugs to you two xxxoooxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/15/2021 12:05:00 PM

- Congratulations on your win, Ann :) - // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/18/2021 4:38:00 AM

Dearest Anne-Lise thank you for your congrats. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Brian Sambourne

Date: 1/15/2021 10:46:00 AM

I especially like this haiku. A memorable picture in the reader's mind. Best wishes, Brian

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/18/2021 4:38:00 AM

Thank you Brian for your lovely comments, much appreciated and nice to meet you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/14/2021 9:28:00 AM

I've been trying to learn to write haikus and invite you to my last effort. You are of course well verse on how to write them Good luck with the contest. ~~

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/14/2021 10:09:00 AM

How kind of you to say that Victor... You are such an accomplished poet I am sure you will achieve your goal my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/14/2021 8:24:00 AM

- Excellent haiku, Ann ... best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/14/2021 8:46:00 AM

Bless you dear Anne-Lise for your lovely comment and I hope you are keeping safe and well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx