Unbearable Weight

unsustainable lightness of empty life,  it's unbearable weight
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Thomas Avatar
June 22, 2022 at 8:45 PM
...reading again. I see why it is on my favorites list. Take care Alkas
Gauthier Avatar
May 3, 2021 at 4:47 PM
food for thought ~ well done, Alkas
Thomas Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 11:01 AM
Excellent monoku Alkas! This is resonating. I love reading poems that just leave me with "wow!" Awesomeness Alkas :)
Poetry Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thank you Very much dear, you are a Very kind person, salute alkas
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 12:12 PM
Hello Alaka, this makes sense to me. A lot of people have a empty life. They do not know what to do to fulfill it. Salute Darlene.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Hello Alakas, Perfection! Your welcome. Salute, Darlene
Poetry Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 12:24 PM
Perfection dear, i thank you for commenting...salute alkas
Downing  Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:19 PM
A deep heartfelt in this amazing line. Great monoku!
Poetry Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 3:03 AM
Thank you dear Akkina so kind of yours commenting grand salute alkas
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