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Unavowed promise

Forlorn tinged faces reminiscing old times Where smiles did not enshroud an ache, And the grueling effort it had to take, Cries of help in their throat they were caught Feeling a shimmer of serenity not a bit distraught, But that's the thing about pain, It might leave for brief moments, But comes back like an unavowed promise from grey clouds to carry the rain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Date: 10/18/2019 7:29:00 AM
Lovely piece. We should do a collab sometime :)
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Date: 6/30/2019 7:53:00 AM
You unveil pain gracefully.. you voice cries in serenity.. you word aches poetically! Wonderful read worthy to be cherished in my fave list.. Regards and blessings.
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Date: 6/23/2019 10:00:00 AM
Powerful, Khadidja. I think your poetry will help many who feel dispair.
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