Unable To Move

Feelings crash
thoughts flash 
remembering the past
as pain fills me so fast
broken dreams
my aching heart
another day that were apart
a cut here a slice there
another tear i cannot bare
a dark soul a cut wrist
suffering in pain due to bliss
my pain is real but love is fake
the feelings i feel 
which keeps me awake
unable to sleep 
with this feeling to keep
leads me to the razor
making long slices so deep.


-Spencer Coggdale dedicated to Roxy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Boyd Avatar
January 20, 2011 at 6:12 AM
Emotion to the extreme and well writen but you have got to get yourself some help. Live is way to short to be misserable all the time. And injuring yourself only makes it worse it dose not gain you sympathy or love. Hope you work things out. sincerly Bobb
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