JC Brul Poet Haiku

umbrella hiku

        
                   L   *       raindrops bounce and roll
              / *      \*     red umbrella sings along~
          /_________\*    summer's  symphony
      *           J

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Andrea Dietrich June 8, 2025 at 2:14 PM So cute and congrats in the contest

Kim Rodrigues June 8, 2025 at 5:41 AM Lovely, JCB! Congrats! Every line singing with the light Summer storm. I can hear it as far as childhood! :)

Bernardo F. Asuncion June 7, 2025 at 11:40 PM Cute artwork. Big congrats, Sister Jcb. I love it.

Paula Goldsmith June 7, 2025 at 11:12 AM WOW!!! What a creative/fun "umbrella hiku" write you have here. Love It... Have a fun day writing away..........